This was just beautiful from start to finish. I loved every word of it. This is probably going to be sort of incoherent and rambly because that's how I get when I really like something, and I really really liked this. <3

Your characterization is just lovely. I adored Teddy, especially his Loki obsession. And Harry's worry over him in the first part where he's sick felt very very real to me, right down to him grabbing Teddy and rushing him to St. Mungo's without even thinking to put on shoes, and his determination to make sure that Teddy has a good Christmas. Draco as a Healer is probably my favorite career for him, and I loved how in the beginning he's so stiff and profession with little peeks to show that a part of him still cares for Harry, the slippers and blanket.

I adored the flashbacks to show me what happened, and how they slowly grew closer to each other, and how they parted ways. And how Harry decided he wanted Malfoy back in his life and wasn't above using Teddy to make it happen.

AND THE KISS OH MY GOD THE KISS. IT DESERVES CAPS. I can't even say how much I love that the POV switched back and forth through it so I got every delicious reaction to it and just, I loved it so much. ::flails::

And then you went and took all my happy kissy feels and smashed them to pieces when Draco turned around and left. But then Harry went right after him with all that wonderful Gryffindor determination he's got and catches him in a towel, and I was all, yes! Shower sex! Happy feels! And then Draco shuts him the fuck down and your smashed my happy feels to pieces all over again.

But then you fixed it again with Ron and Hermione, who were wonderfully written, and them approaching (ambushing?) Draco at work, though I was a little afraid when Harry and Teddy were talking, but then Draco came back and then the end! Jack the dog! Morning shower sex! Getting married! More bacon! More Loki! I'm in love with this story and I'm sure it's one I'm going to be rereading over and over. <3