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07 March 2014 @ 07:45 pm
Come back to me  
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sophie_french

Prompt Number: 17

Title: Come Back to Me

Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione

Summary:Lily Malfoy-Potter could ask Father Christmas many things: a beautiful doll with glittering pink and purple robes, a stuffed kneazle just like her cousin Rose’s or even a colour-changing diadem like the princesses in the bedtime stories her Papa tells her. But she won’t. No, this year, she will only ask for one thing: for her Papa and Daddy to get back together and be happy again. She just can’t wait.

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning(s): Explicit sex, bad language

Epilogue compliant? No.

Word Count: ~28k

Author's Notes: Dear Drarryxlover, I think I have respected what you wanted in your prompt and I really hope you will like it!

I have been listening to many songs during the writing of this fic, among them Everybody Hurts Sometimes (REM), Sorry Seems to Be the Hardest Word (Elton John), Still Loving You (Scorpions), It’s a Heartache (Bonnie Tyler) and Unchained Melody (Righteous Brothers). A huge, immense thank you to my betas and pre-readers C, L and I for their patience and precious advice!


Come back to me

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[identity profile] iwao.livejournal.com on March 21st, 2014 02:54 pm (UTC)
Okay, very quickly now, bebé, because I've just spent the last hour reading instead of working and I have SO MUCH work to do in half an hour!!!

Since we betaed this fic, I didn't see it again. What I'm trying to say is that I read it as I betaed and we discussed things and changes, but then for some reason I NEVER read the finished work. I have now. And MY GOD! Bebé, it's BEAUTIFUL!! How didn't I realize before how beautiful it is? Now, with the distance since betaing and editing and correcting, I've read it anew, like I hadn't seen it before, and I absolutely loved it. It had me welling up in places and breathless in others, and I loved every word! (except maybe a few "incredibly"s because you know I hate that word. Lol!) This is just perfect and their voices are perfect, and I hope you are very proud of yourself, because I'm brimming with pride right now even for my tiny contribution to your work.

I love it bebé, and if you ever doubt yourself again i'll clomp you over the head with a club. 'Nuff said.

*glomps*

AN: Edited to correct a couple of typos. I hate typos!


Edited 2014-03-21 05:38 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] sophie-french.livejournal.com on March 22nd, 2014 03:42 pm (UTC)
You already know everything about this story, so I won't add anything but thank you, once again, for having supported me throughout it, for giving me great advice that will stay with me, for making this story much better than it was, and for writing this comment that, like all the others, I've read over and over again and I will keep somewhere to read on bad days.

Just, thank you. ♥