07 March 2014 @ 07:45 pm
Come back to me  
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sophie_french

Prompt Number: 17

Title: Come Back to Me

Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione

Summary:Lily Malfoy-Potter could ask Father Christmas many things: a beautiful doll with glittering pink and purple robes, a stuffed kneazle just like her cousin Rose’s or even a colour-changing diadem like the princesses in the bedtime stories her Papa tells her. But she won’t. No, this year, she will only ask for one thing: for her Papa and Daddy to get back together and be happy again. She just can’t wait.

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning(s): Explicit sex, bad language

Epilogue compliant? No.

Word Count: ~28k

Author's Notes: Dear Drarryxlover, I think I have respected what you wanted in your prompt and I really hope you will like it!

I have been listening to many songs during the writing of this fic, among them Everybody Hurts Sometimes (REM), Sorry Seems to Be the Hardest Word (Elton John), Still Loving You (Scorpions), It’s a Heartache (Bonnie Tyler) and Unchained Melody (Righteous Brothers). A huge, immense thank you to my betas and pre-readers C, L and I for their patience and precious advice!


Come back to me

 
 
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[identity profile] dracogotgame.livejournal.com on March 7th, 2014 03:53 pm (UTC)
That was delightful! So sweet and the plot was so smooth! The characterizations were perfect, the whole situation seemed very intense and real. Somehow it's amazing that you managed to work out so much fluff with the buckets of angst in this story :)

The ending with the brightest star was a marvellous touch, just tied it all together so well.

Thank you for a charming tale, it was a treat to read!
[identity profile] sophie-french.livejournal.com on March 22nd, 2014 03:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you so, so much for this comment. You have no idea how happy I was when I read it the first time, especially since I've struggled so much with characterisation in this fic. It was the first time I was writing Harry and Draco older, and well, it was harder than I expected.

Coming from you, an author I love, it means a lot to me.

Thank you very, very much! :)



Edited 2014-03-22 03:39 pm (UTC)