oh this was fantastic!
the pining
the no magic failure - its so awesome that harry sucks at building a tent, and that draco took pictures of himself- because he is beautiful the tent building was not XD
and then the sweet, sweet giving in
and oh teddy that was a very bight idea by you!
that little guy really did great, he knows how he gets what he wants!
great, lovely story! with cuteness, fluff and hot body description (see no mention of the awesome smut you have written, a clean comment here XD)