I was so scared for Teddy at the beginning, you painted that picture so well, Harry walking in with Teddy on his arms without shoes and sick with worry, my heart went for him, for them.
And then Draco, so professional and distant, but then I began to understand, and wow, you did a brilliant job showing just how much it hurt him when Harry pushed him away. I mean, it really made me understand, in my heart, how Draco felt, how betrayed he was for what happened, and I felt for him, his loneliness, and this single thing marked him all these years later.
And then Harry, man, in just a few words you wrote him so sexy, while he was cooking while listening to music. I have no idea why, but that scene was perfect.
And dude, the food, my mouth was watering! I googled everything to have more visuals because the way you described it was making me hungry. I could literally smell the brandy butter. I'm not even kidding. I went to the kitchen to see if I could find anything at all to eat because, well, you made me hungry! Lol
Oh! And that confrontation in Draco's place, just wow, the was all kinds of perfect, as it was the way Draco thought of it back after Ron and Hermione's visit, and how Harry was fighting now, and how many it was time for Draco to stop fighting, that was amazing.
I loved the way Harry was with Teddy, how you could tell how much he loved him and cared for him, He's all I've got. God. And then He's like a girl with all the hugging, honestly and yes! I could tell how much Harry would give to make Teddy happy, not spoiling him, just yeah.
OMG!!!! Loki! LOL Quidditch never had a change against this obsession. Poor Harry. XD
This was just brilliant. I enjoyed every word. Thank you so much for this story. <3
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I was so scared for Teddy at the beginning, you painted that picture so well, Harry walking in with Teddy on his arms without shoes and sick with worry, my heart went for him, for them.
And then Draco, so professional and distant, but then I began to understand, and wow, you did a brilliant job showing just how much it hurt him when Harry pushed him away. I mean, it really made me understand, in my heart, how Draco felt, how betrayed he was for what happened, and I felt for him, his loneliness, and this single thing marked him all these years later.
And then Harry, man, in just a few words you wrote him so sexy, while he was cooking while listening to music. I have no idea why, but that scene was perfect.
And dude, the food, my mouth was watering! I googled everything to have more visuals because the way you described it was making me hungry. I could literally smell the brandy butter. I'm not even kidding. I went to the kitchen to see if I could find anything at all to eat because, well, you made me hungry! Lol
Oh! And that confrontation in Draco's place, just wow, the was all kinds of perfect, as it was the way Draco thought of it back after Ron and Hermione's visit, and how Harry was fighting now, and how many it was time for Draco to stop fighting, that was amazing.
I loved the way Harry was with Teddy, how you could tell how much he loved him and cared for him, He's all I've got. God. And then He's like a girl with all the hugging, honestly and yes! I could tell how much Harry would give to make Teddy happy, not spoiling him, just yeah.
OMG!!!! Loki! LOL Quidditch never had a change against this obsession. Poor Harry. XD
This was just brilliant. I enjoyed every word. Thank you so much for this story. <3