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hd_family_mod ([personal profile] hd_family_mod) wrote in [community profile] hd_familyfest2014-03-04 07:45 pm

Iridescent

Author: [livejournal.com profile] bloodisshrp
Prompt Number: 30
Title: Iridescent
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Summary: They've been together for seven years now and married for four of them, so when Harry finds out he's going to be a father he couldn't be more ecstatic. But something is troubling Draco and Harry can only hope his husband can confide in him before it get's too much to handle.
Rating: PG 13
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning(s): Mpreg, past miscarriage
Epilogue compliant? Nope
Word Count: 7164
Author's Notes: This started out as 15,000+ words of angst till I remembered it's a familyfest! I don't know how well I succeeded in making it less angsty but I tried. Seriously. Loads of hugs to kc who helped me whip this thing into shape and didn't let the commas eat me alive.

Iridescent

[identity profile] lyonessheart.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey :) I loved the ending, and that the crying baby was not what Draco feared in the beginning. But I definitly would have some choice words with that Healer! Ever heard of patience confidentiality? I am just glad that you resolved everything so beautifully.

And yey for Harry being oblivious and blundering again and again.

So thank you for a perfect piece that combined angst with fluff in a wonderful way!

[identity profile] dracogotgame.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, it was lovely! The angst was perfect and the happy ending just clinched it. So very sweet.

[identity profile] sophie-french.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
That was a sweet read even if a bit angsty! I liked the communication with the baby! Thank you! :)

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2014-03-04 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
This was lovely. I was so scared that the baby crying meant something was wrong. You really turned that around on me! Very interesting concept! I enjoyed reading this, thank you!

(Anonymous) 2014-03-05 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
Dear mystery author,

The warnings scared me off a bit because I didn't want to read something too angsty but I'm so glad I gave this story a chance.

It was beautiful! I loved the way you took such a hurty prompt and worked fluffy bits into it. :) Draco and Harry's relationship was beautiful and I loved the silent strength Harry offered Draco <3

You've nailed the prompt completely. AND THANK YOU for the adorable ending!


[identity profile] dragon2stars.livejournal.com 2014-03-09 05:46 am (UTC)(link)
My prompt I am so excited!You did such a
lovely job adding a bit of angst in the story and the baby crying was love.Thanks so much author I loved this piece.
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[personal profile] capitu 2014-03-10 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
That was wonderful. I loved this, I felt for Draco though, suffering alone after everything he went through, thinking he had to suffer alone, but I'm so glad Harry was there for him, that he let him, you know? And that ending, that ending was beyond sweet. :)
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[personal profile] firethesound 2014-03-20 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
This was such a lovely blend of sweetness and pain. Poor Draco, what he'd gone through, but I loved how Harry knew all along and was trying his best to be so supportive.