http://fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hd_familyfest 2015-03-03 10:12 pm (UTC)

I liked the flow of the story where we start with Harry's pining and then the increasing warning signs that something is very wrong and Draco is in danger. I loved how you describe the smell of the magic. It made it visceral. Lucius' escape left a feeling of suspense that hung over their burgeoning romance until the end.
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